November 10, 2014 — words on a blackboard
Today I put an end
Today I put an end
I seek the rain to comfort me
The night to weave new dreams
The light to see myself again
Cause in the midst of quarrelling winds, I’ve changed.
Today I put an end
I see the waves washing all the sand that kept me still
The maps showing trails and many other stops to come
The moments filled with ease and praise
Cause in the midst of falling leaves, I saw how much I’ve gained.
Today I put an end
I feel the days beginning with all the sun embraced
The seconds floating free in the unknown, going with the stream
The jubilation in a heartbeat that made the clouds turn pale and grin
Cause in the midst of whirling seas, the utmost calm can come within.
such a powerful poem. I can feel the calm within myself after reading this. splendid. you are an amazing writer
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Reblogged this on Gemini's Lament and commented:
This.
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I bless the rain down on you
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Beautiful! To be free of all that was and that which will never be. Free to feel the sun’s embrace and know that all is well. It is over. Peace from within. To finally close the book of past endeavors, having stared at the last word for years. Gently the book folds and it is placed on the bookshelf to spend its eternal days. Upon looking, a new book appears. Its pages are blank, there for you to fill in the space with your life, your love and your truth. Let your heart guide you and your pen never stop expressing all the beauty you have inside.
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Inspiring, comforting, gives me hope. Thank you
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Reblogged this on Pieces of Bipolar and commented:
As I navigate my personal turmoil, this poem brings light to the road leading towards hope
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Loved this so much 🙂 excellent piece ❤
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I love your use of imagery .
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A gorgeous poem, and a fabulous final line. Thanks for sharing this beauty and wisdom. H xxx
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comforting and inspiring. thank you!
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Lovely and touching. ❤
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Lovely poem. The moment realisation dawns and you are able to draw a line under the past and look to the future, put beautifully.
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wonderfully inspiring and peaceful.
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True, inner peace a virtue from within, given by One without. Enjoyed the read.
ichibon
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So beautiful! ❤
Congratulations! 🙂
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Wow wow wow–this is fabulous.
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“the rain to comfort… the night to weave new dreams” it’s very true
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So beautiful!
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(((Awhoooo)))
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❤ …
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scrii cumva si-n limba româna?… 😉 sanatate si galaxii de inspiratie, azi si mereu… 🙂
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Da, scriu și în română, dar toamna asta am vrut o schimbare așa că am zis să încerc și versurile și engleza 🙂
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Well built poems. Strong lines.
May your poems reflect joy.
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Such powerful yet beautiful words…very inspiring !
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“In the midst of falling leaves, I saw how much I’ve gained”
Thank you for this piece!
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One word “beautiful”
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This is pleasure to read and inspiring.
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Very beautiful. The lines read like musical notes…I cane hear your voice.
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This is really good and very encouraging!!! Keep up the awesomeness!
-Arwen 😉
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Hi, Just to let You Know, I Love Your Poetry! 🍃You have a Real Gift with it!
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Hey there! Again, I love this poem; really well written. 😀 So I’ve nominated you for the Liebster Award here: http://usgbconfessions.wordpress.com/2015/01/04/liebster-award/. Enjoy! 🙂
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Incredibly beautiful. I love your poetry!
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I agree with Aish–very powerful. Congratulations.
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Vivid imagery of change
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